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Nickname: Blaqmermaid
Country: United States
City: Beltsville
State: MD
Gender: Female
Age: 30
Member Since: Sep 13, 2008
Last Login: Dec 27, 2008
Poems Submitted: 22
Average Ranking:
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Poem Comments: 123
Poem Views: 1,084
Member Comments: 14


About Me
 
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About Me:
Avid reader and writer intrigued by sorcery, magic, the supernatural, and the extra ordinary. Music is also a love of mine. I've just completed the first installment in my erotic fantasy series: Taste, which is now available! Check out www.blaqmermaidpress.com.

 


1. Snow White
      by Lil Sweetness
2. His Footsteps
      by .Candice.Renee'.[...
3. Just Wait
      by A.C.H.
4. Desire
      by Tha Scorpion
5. The Path
      by unforgivenangel
6. Shine Through To You
      by Sie7e
7. Seasons Of Beauty
      by unforgivenangel
8. Come On
      by Soultalk
9. Who Are They
      by Demon of Darkness
10. Come Inside
      by Snugasaglove (The...
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1. I Want My Freedom Back
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2. Dear Daddy
      by Rayve
3. I Wanna Love You
      by sizzlingpoetry
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TITLE CATEGORY RATING DATE SUBMITTED VIEWS COMMENTS
Mood Indigo haiku Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 12/06/08 (12:03 AM) 23 4
Miles (Our Metaphor) erotic Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 11/13/08 (07:08 PM) 40 8
I've Got a Theory (4 Malcolm X) politics Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 10/06/08 (11:47 PM) 44 6
He love Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 09/30/08 (09:07 PM) 63 7
A Cajun Kiss love Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 09/30/08 (08:57 PM) 29 6
A Hospital for Sick Folks spiritual Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 09/30/08 (10:43 AM) 50 7
24 Hours to Binge spoken Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 09/30/08 (10:27 AM) 29 5
The Relationship Omelette haiku Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 09/27/08 (11:45 PM) 47 11
I Vote... politics Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 09/22/08 (09:27 PM) 60 8
When Mirrors Speak... (Introspection) haiku Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 09/14/08 (07:03 PM) 50 8

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 Commented on the poem "You" on 12/08/08 at 09:04 PM
You've managed to really master form. Seriously. You place words on the page like no other AND it reads EXACTLY as you meant it to. Please recognize that this requires an intuition that not all writers have. Your form speaks as well as your words. It's almost like having an interpreter to further dissect the meaning of your poems. EXCELLENT. Wonderful word play. This was great!

 Commented on the poem "Tag-Teamin'" on 12/08/08 at 09:00 PM
First three stanzas are wonderfully written. I love the unofficial rhythm of the lines. It's a choppy end rhyme and assonance pattern that works well throughout the entire piece. This was great. I felt the gritty passion of the intimacy. Your voice worked well.

 Commented on the poem "U n I verse" on 12/08/08 at 08:53 PM
Love the look of this one. This poem has so many strengths sis, I'm not sure where to begin. DNA doing DANces was cleverly done. I also love the line "superceeding meeting my needing." A litany of alliteration (my favorite poetic device) follows this that floats on the tongue. Spiraling was divine! I love the way that looks on the page. FLAWLESS!

 Commented on the poem "Tasting Rainbows" on 12/08/08 at 08:46 PM
Witty! This is too clever. So damn succinct I nearly missed it. Very very entertaining and I love the lips!

 Commented on the poem "Wild Cherry Coke Bottles and Cans. Considering..." on 12/08/08 at 08:44 PM
I like this alot. You've transcended alot here. Form, lines, voice... this poem is truly didactic yet it isn't too preachy. I love the direct approach, yet the abstract feel makes it a comfortable read. Diamonds and cherries... what an odd mix, an oxymoron. Great job!

 
  Love is Forbidden. Pleasure Reigns. Taste the Fantasy.
  November 29, 2008 at 09:17 PM
Taste: An Erotic Fantasy Series, Book I

by B. Sharise Moore

SYNOPSIS

On Ido, island of Sphinx people, cocooned cities, and Mer Ancestors, love and monogamy are strictly prohibited, physical pleasures abound, and a brewing civil war pits youth and virility against age and experience.

The Ido Youth seek the preservation of Taste, a set of carnal rites of passage beginning in the 21st year and ending with climax, Enlightenment, and Elderhood. Meanwhile, the Elders vow to obliterate the old traditions in favor of The One Faith, a religion of love, marriage, restraint, and discipline under the direction of a mysterious foreigner known simply as, The Guide.

At the center of the war is Onya, esteemed warrior and daughter of the shrewd Elder General Dame. Though dedicated to both Taste and tradition, she begins to question the very core of her beliefs when she falls in love with Quince, co-General of the Youth Cause. Together they must navigate otherworldly pleasures, the savagery of war, an intrusive religion, and their own forbidden love.

 
 
 
 
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Jamillah
01/08/09 (04:55 AM)
Hey B! Started a group called Writeous Drops. Please check it out.. see if its something you'd like to join. I'd appreciate your presence. As the name suggests, its a spot to deposit your "conscious" drops.. pardon my shameless plug: ANYONE ELSE READING YOU ARE WELCOME TO JOIN, AS WELL! Thanks..

 
Jamillah
12/09/08 (01:09 AM)
wow.. sis u don't know what your words mean(t) to me... talk about thoughtful comments.... I sincerely appreciate the time you took to critique my pieces... as much as I enjoy and appreciate any and all who ever visit my page.. my work, I don't think I've ever had a reader provide THAT kind of feedback... I don't consider myself a poet, frankly... but I do enjoy writing and am inspired by the many wonderful poets I've encountered here. Aside from reading, I most enjoy picking poets bra...
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Jamillah
12/06/08 (09:30 AM)
how could i have missed your presence??? to say I enjoy(ed) is an understatement..

 
LAB **Ms. Cool...
12/03/08 (07:55 AM)
big fan of your work... hope to see more.

 
Noir
12/01/08 (04:56 PM)
Thanx for stopping by my page beautiful. Your presence was truly felt.


 
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