Came to your page to leave you some love since we've been playing phone (un)tag...your it..not expecting to see a new write from you..forgot to leave a comment on your front page due to the excitement of guaranteed reader's satisfaction... but...GURL!!!!.. I had no idea what I was in store for...I really dont have words to add to this, speechless in comment box...drowning in the emotions this left me with...I can honestly say that you use to be my 2nd favorite poet but as of now you are swimming in the #1 spot with him... Love, Love, Love this
Absolutely loved this because not only did it tell a story but as I read each stanza, each verse gave meaning to something more elaborate... secondly the task of doing a collab with two poets who didnt know of the other and having it mesh so well, also your assumed joy in writing with poets you admire..The words and depth of the 4th stanza grabbed me to make me start over and read again..wonderfully done
Commented on the poem "Poisoned" on 12/18/08 at 08:14 PM
my comment would be as long as this poem, but not for me to say my thoughts on such a seemingly personal piece, i will just read and feel the rain
Commented on the poem "One More Try" on 12/17/08 at 07:42 PM
"Dont you come to soon"... well, well, well...double meaning?? serenity of possibilities
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Commented on the poem "Cohesive End" on 12/28/08 at 05:11 PM
