Nickname:beautifuliiwrittyn Country:United States City:Annapolis State:MD Gender:Female Age:20 Member Since:May 06, 2008 Last Login:Jan 08, 2009 Poems Submitted:58 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:47 Poem Views:1,754 Member Comments:1
d*mn,....ii fuck with this poem hard!! ii always tried to look at it like you were brave, even though you were the victim the fact that she fought back made her a soulja the fact that they ran makes him && his friend some b*tches they took something from her but she came out on top what don't kill you makes you strong!!!! sometimes you gotta learn it the hard way
ii love this piece 10 starz && stay ^
Commented on the poem "LOSING OUR PLACE" on 12/04/08 at 12:50 PM
ii loved it favorite line "full of pride,...but hollow inside" ii don't know what it is ii swear we are just getting worse and worse it's shameful,...really it's just disappointing cuz' ii know we can do better[shakes head n leaves] 10 starz
ii love this,...dhope write,...real talk ii don't even know what to say just keep writing
Commented on the poem "WHAT DO YOU SEE?" on 11/06/08 at 01:41 PM
lmao ii love it ii swear great write you put it perfectly loved it absolutely loved it 10 stars && keep doin wat chyu do
Commented on the poem "Stretch Marks" on 11/05/08 at 12:30 PM
ii like this poem my mother was always proud of hers; i guess because she's always been proud of me beautiful write; && you need to keep him 10 starz
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