This was a great collab between to crazy minds....straight metaphors when y'all two team up..n yaall fed off of what each other said made it a story n it flowed better becuz of it nicely scribed homies tenz
Dang bruh dis went hard was long but sumtimes when u bleed out u just gotta let the pen run dry hot drop fully of emotion n meaning..dref appreciated this drop tens all round
Commented on the poem "LET IT BURN" on 01/08/09 at 07:25 PM
Very hearetfelt write even know this was a I'm fed up write I still see the pain behind it becuz it does hurt sumtimes to let sum1 go when u really wantd it to work out n it used to feel so right..ten stars
Commented on the poem "Unhappy" on 01/08/09 at 09:15 AM
Wow this was sadly beautiful..the sacrifice made for ur child that's admirable homie but sooner or later its going to consume u n u wnt b able 2 do it anymore dnt kno how he cnt notice u..ur very beautiful n talented..jus hate to see sum1 hurtn when they dnt gotta..great write
Commented on the poem "Speed Bytching" on 01/08/09 at 08:31 AM
Aha damn dis went hard loving the anger expressed behind the piece sometimes u jus gotta go crazy on the write n take out ur frustration on the page greatly penned homie maybe we can collab in the future like yo word play
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