Nickname:Angel Country:United States City:Houston State:TX Gender:Female Age:28 Member Since:Jun 27, 2007 Last Login:Jan 08, 2009 Poems Submitted:175 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:1,127 Poem Views:13,896 Member Comments:476
I love everything about this write. First of all, the conversational tone of this entire write was a very nice touch, but more than that, the dialect chosen... just the term "poeting"... Very nice write. I'm loving your versatility.
That's exactly what an abusive man's afraid of - confronting a man. They love the power they have over a woman who's maybe not physically equivalent to them. The poetry itself, very well done. But, the message. I'm loving the message in this write. Love the presentation as well.
Commented on the poem "3x2=1" on 01/05/09 at 10:39 PM
May I just add the fact that you're preaching to the choir in this write?!? lol... The way this began, hurts a lot. It sounds like you're pouring a lot of love into this man, and he's giving nothing in return. Just reading the first verse... it's like... where's the man worthy of these love writes? Where's the good in him? I'm seeing your love for him, but where's his love for you? We women have a tendency to hold tight to the ghost of love long passed... hope that's not what I'm reading here.
Commented on the poem "1-3-09" on 01/05/09 at 10:32 PM
Falling in love with a man who's standoffish with you (at best) is hell on earth. Believe me, I know. Sometimes, the truth is in the actions. Other times, men aren't really comfortable showing their true feelings. Time tells all secrets... so, the lover in me wants to say give him time. But only you walk in your shoes. Learn the man, know the man, and choose with your head. Hearts have a tendency to lie.
Commented on the poem "Sour Cream" on 01/02/09 at 10:34 AM
lol... that pic alone is upsetting my stomach... but, yeah... everybody's a pimp nowadays.. or strives to be, at least. Such a waste of time and space... sigh...
Hey girl! Started a group called Writeous Drops. Please check it out.. see if its something you'd like to join. I'd appreciate your presence. As the name suggests, its a spot to deposit your "conscious" drops.. pardon my shameless plug: ANYONE ELSE READING YOU ARE WELCOME TO JOIN, AS WELL! Thanks..
thank u angel-face-baby-cakes lol... dont ask me why but i had the urge to go there lol... feeln very giddy, i guess...... hope your year is off to a great start.... we're already two days in... can you believe it??? It's almost done already lol.... sike...... thank u (tho you said it wasn't necessary.... you can't stop me.. so there lol)... peace peace.