This was interesting...you took it in a direction that I did not expect, and leave me thinking..."hmmm...". I would be one to say walk away, its not worth it, etc, but yet...this had so much hope for a positive outcome in it as well, and the spiritual touch towards the end...a great one to debate. Loved how you constructed this.
Commented on the poem "By the pool" on 12/13/08 at 02:48 PM
This is a wonderful piece, paying homage to two talented poets. Well constructed, and wonderfully delivered...Ya'll complemented each other very well, and the flow from one verse to the other is amazing. Ya'll declared destructive warlike intent indeed!
This was wnderful storytelling, as you left so much to be deciphered by the reader's onw imagination, which can only leave us back to the same place...me, being a cynic am glad the she left the backtabbing bastard! LOL!
Well...?
August 04, 2008 at 11:57 PM
Just mullin' about, gettin' on with the business of life.
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