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Commented on the poem "Clustered Emotions" on 01/05/09 at 02:41 PM

well damn....that's some clutttered emotion's if i have ever read 'em...beautiful scribe as my fam Boog say...i love the rawness and stuttered openness if u will...keep it coming and much respect J-

Commented on the poem "Collabo - The Ripple Effect (3rd Law)" on 12/18/08 at 06:09 PM

Damn Hommie didn't kno u was outtie 2...lol yeah i had 2 get ghost and get back on my grown man 4 real...it was and always has been my pleasure working with you Fam...u kno u always pushed me 2 the point of personal best...and always amazed me with you mental...hope all is blessed with you and u achieve everything you heart and soul desires...if and when u come back...hit me up...Much respect J

Commented on the poem "THOUGHTS OF SUICIDE" on 11/19/08 at 08:19 PM

Wow...Yeah i think eveyrone reaches a point where it become's 2 much...seem's now a day's EVERYONE BEEN 2 THAT POINT! lol...but i am also glad u wrote Ur Emotion Instead of Acted On it...I've been down that road as well just like Stray12 and U..but @ 1st when i used 2 get folks tellin me"What don't kill You make u Stronger" i would cuss 'em out cause i would think"You aint in my shoe's Can't Wear My Pair"...Until i remember That everyone wear's a pair..and so many have worse sneak's then me...right?...ya digg?...simple put u got so much more 2 live 4...and it's about finding what 2 live 4...and who..other then the lord of course..cause he should be #1 and u #2...right? Also i think it's bout hittin that next Rung on the Ladder of Life and Truth..in Turn climbing 2 the height's of wisdom's Wise...and Life's Cherished...Use that Amazing Mind Of Ur's...Don't just Accept what's given 2 you! But Be Humble Enough 2 See the Sincerly Vital and Profound Thing's,Situation's...as Life is living....and everyone On...How Ya Livin'.....Or Get it how U Live...i always thought how funny the thing's we say when we speak on instinct...channel that Ubelieveable Side biding time inside You...and Most Of All...When u feel like Your On Top of the World...or You Feel like everything's going ur way..or at least ok...when You feelin Good...Feeling Like Can't No 1 Fuck wit Chu Shawty cause You kno You It...U Kno U da Shit...Or Even when u feel like this if u ever do again...close ya eye's...and focus and just pray..and thank the lord 4 that moment...honestly...thank him 4 your Trail's..your fault's..your follies...all of it...Then thank him 4 your blessing's..Unseen and Realized...and 4 All the love his Emitt's 2 you...ask him 2 4give you as you truly do not know...cause we really don't...Figure out what You Hold dear...what Really mean's the world 2 you.. Hope ya out da mood u was in when u wrote dis...much respect J.

Commented on the poem "THIS IS WHY I CRY....." on 11/19/08 at 07:53 PM

i agree with Stray12 and King...they both had vaild point's...yo point blank queen i have learn many thing's..4gotten more...lol but pain,love,want,desire,deserve...really all fall in the same cat...see queen we all want the same thing...but we all also act like everyone else doesn't want what we want...ya kno?...think about it...those "Men" who mistreated you..or hurt you...didn't appreciate you...made you cry all that...do u think they really took the time 2 learn who u are inside and out...or more so just enjoyed being in ur company cause of your look's and what u bring 2 the table...so they say...so i mean what i don't understand about women is just like Kiekeebaby said...we put y'all threw so much right?...but doesn't it go both way's.?...not saying they were right in ever hurting or abusing your mind,body,soul...but mankind as a whole need's 2 start looking in the mirror and seeing what we truly are...and how vauleable we truly are 2 each other...it aint the money..nor the fame..nor the car's..the house's and mansion's..the clothes and club's...it aint all that flashing light's and all that in which we Deserve and Desire...but simple..it's Love..it's appreciation...comfort...what i got outta this piece is that you want someone 2 comfort you without having 2 try and be romantic with you..or get da goodies so 2 speak...u want a man who will rub ya feet like ya said in "Mr.New" not cause it's his job or obligation..but because he wanted 2 help you relax and ease your mind..not 2 mention he wanted 2 see you happy and smilling like you said u don't do in this piece....yet and still this was real and truth...i hope you see the true beauty of which god put in u queen cause it aint that angelic face or Goddess's body...it's your mind and soul...the spirit that compell's all....and they always told me..."When they see the God In You!" they gon' try and claim it 4 themselve's...use it and try and tame it 4 them only...ya kno?...point blank u deserve so much more then u see...and i hope u start seeing all that u are and not just the model aspect and all that of which so many queen's these day's focused on...much love and respect as always Jermaine

Commented on the poem "MR. NEW" on 11/19/08 at 07:43 PM

very deep Ma...your words and emotion's was powerful proclaimed...i wish u the best with this idea and piece...hope u right...much respect keep sharing iight?. J.