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"Melancholy Moments"
  by Ms. Sincerious


Trying to enjoy the calm of things
Quiet is interrupted when chaos rings..
.It deafens me.


Trying to live light-hearted-ly
Picnic’s over when rain starts fall-ing.
.It weighs on me.


Trying to keep my head to the sky
Fantasies lose enchantment to the truth of a lie.
.It brings me down.


Trying to mask sadness with a happy disguise
State of mind honestly reflects in the eyes..
.It conquers my smiles.


Hoping- a better day will come tomorrow…
But for today-
Just looking for a new smile to borrow.



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Date Submitted: Nov 24, 2008 (10:01 AM)
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  .:I WILL NOT B...
11/30/08 (02:37 AM) 
oh and just wanted to add that i really like the way you structured this poem. nicely done.

  .:I WILL NOT B...
11/30/08 (02:36 AM) 
awww mama....we all have these days and at least you looking for a smile to borrow, which means there is hope still. that's so much better than not trying to smile at all. lol. hey, i'm just trying to find a positive way to look at it, lol. I like this background, the stress is so vivid here....and that...i can mos def understand and relate too. I like though that you said tomorrow will be a better day and indeed it will be and I wish I knew how not to carry my troubles over into tomorrow but I...
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  --->ROXIE<---
11/27/08 (09:46 PM) 
that bg is serious!! damn!! "Trying to mask sadness with a happy disguise State of mind honestly reflects in the eyes.. .It conquers my smiles." <---like u climed right in my head wit that!!

  BSavvy
11/25/08 (12:46 PM) 
You can borrow mine sweetie until yours genuinely comes back and it will. I know all to well about the facade.... This too shall pass... Love the sincerity in this write and I definitely felt your emotions.

  DaddysGirl
11/25/08 (11:23 AM) 
i know this place- i've definitely been here. you expressed your mood flawlessly in the piece. the tone is very somber & the image in the background really speaks volumes along with your words. Very nicely done, Ma. ~Much Love~

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