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"Me + You {Revisited W/Audio} **also on main page**"
  by Group: ThugLuv Poetry


*First piece I eva dropped on Ghetto Soul*

Ayo 1 + 1 = 2
but me + you
yo that = 1
At least that's what I thought
cuz you see you had me believin'
Our love was eternal
thoughts formed in my mind
mouth was my pen
but girl you…
yo you was my journal
you had what no one did,
the best of me
mind...frame & soul
now I see I had what mad niggas did yo
if truth be told
I can't help but think back on dem nights
when I was knee deep in your nature
girl and you was holdin my tight
lookin' deep in my eyes you was sayin'
“Ayo papi, I'ma love you truly...
I’ma love you right"
yeah, now I see that them words were just that
WORDS
so now I gots to be strong
Girl I gotta to move on,
Ma I gotta let you fly like them birds
but still for now
I’ma just sit
I’ma sit and let these tears flow like the rain
cuz u made me realize that
1 + 1 = 2
but me + you,
Yo that =
Pain.



ThugLuv Poetry Y'all
me pluss you.wav - J@yBoogz
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Date Submitted: Nov 29, 2008 (02:59 PM)
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  ataraxia
11/29/08 (06:04 PM) 
This is nice, although a couple of lines really drew me in. first - that she was your journal...um...brilliant. other power line to me was - knee deep in your nature...again, brilliant, poetic, beautiful. Thank you for sharing this.

  KiNg-Go0B3r
11/29/08 (03:10 PM) 
hmm damn this was some real poetic spit right here i trully digs it great fo a first drop

  .:I WILL NOT B...
11/29/08 (03:06 PM) 
*gasping with jaw dropped* ....*eyes blinking rapidly* did he really just post this classic J@y piece?!?!?! ahhhhhh....sweet Jesus...yo I love this scribe. the ending kills me every time and lets me just sink in the melancholy of that last line "1 + 1 = 2 but me + you, Yo that = Pain." ugh. yo I could dedicate this to someone right now and for the rest of my life it would always remain true. man....*sigh*.....ugh...this was too damn emotional for me to be getting back into right now. but thank y...
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