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"Me."
  by .Always.Catalina.
  - This Poem is a response to the poem ...Still... by .Always.Catalina.


History (CDQ/Full) - Jay-Z

When all the smoke is gone
history became the past of victory
that left a long withstanding legacy
told through the eyes of C.A.T
the battle to be forever free
was each and everyone's destiny
delivered something like a parable
in poetic story
not biblical but still a testimony
to defeat being the bully of history
and if you can't make that
than there's no shot at victory
can't wear the shackles of psychology
act like victims and expect the spoils of sustainability
without an end to that kind of mentality
than we could never be free
no one will ever see
and stuck in the middle of the battery
taking the assaults
quietly making history the victor
as was intended to be
stands success at my side
death waiting calmly
the only things left
after the retrospect of the road to victory
I will stand
Ammazed
But
Still

Me.

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Date Submitted: Dec 04, 2008 (10:07 PM)
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  Manisha
12/07/08 (04:15 PM) 
And you never cease to amaze me!

  --->ROXIE<---
12/06/08 (10:16 AM) 
dope with the wordplay in this...and deep wit the message...i really liked this one

  Ms. Sincerious
12/05/08 (01:16 PM) 
"stands success at my side death waiting calmly the only things left after the retrospect of the road to victory I will stand Ammazed But Still Me. "... much respect on the way you wrote this.. i been wanting to write to this.. and have started mroe than once and never completed it.. but this is a strong scribe. Very nice.

  Blakfiya
12/05/08 (11:41 AM) 
Can only do you, lady...and when a person really knows themselves and what they are for and about...that is truly a feat.

  Reeta
12/05/08 (10:59 AM) 
awwww on MA MAFUCKIN' TRACK THO' TOO!!!! MA NIGGA JAY THO'??!!! AND THEN U MURDERED THE SHIT ALL CRAZY...UHHHH...CHUUUCHHHH....I FUCKIN' LOVE IT.

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