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"me."
  by redbone011


I'd like tew be me
for just one day
just tew see whut yew would say
I'd remove all that isn't me
just tew see if yew would like me for me
if I remove all that isn't me
would yew still talk tew &+care for me
like yew did when I pretended tew be someone else
or would yew laugh &+say mean things
like I was nothing nice tew see
I'll give it one try
&+if it all goes well I'll be me &+only me
&+that's all I'll ever be..

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Date Submitted: Oct 11, 2008 (03:39 PM)
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  stayfocus3d
10/12/08 (04:33 AM) 
the message is so tru in this...people always tend to act like sumone else jus to please someone that they wanna be with...wen in reality if u caint b urself around somebody and have them still like u then that relationship really isnt a relationship at all...so keep doin u

  after vision
10/11/08 (04:23 PM) 
i am into this write for several reasons -- short spankings last a long time -- this is the belt of truth

  MarkyMark
10/11/08 (03:56 PM) 
I like this....i think a lot of ppl can relate. But jus b u anyway. He not worth it if he dont like u for u

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