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"Me & My Cigarette"
  by Group: ThugLuv Poetry


A PICTURE IS WORTH A THOUSAND WORDS
-THUGLUV CHALLENGE-
13 LINES ONLY



with my head crocked to the side as my mind
aims me in the direction to showcase thoughts picture..
i place the hair in my face around my ear with the cigarette in position

my lips meet the butt as a clouded sensation fills my lungs
and while i release the smoke it causes the tears to flow..
leaving me to become even more mentally unbalanced

its suppose to have that key remedy
it is suppose to put me at ease
yet i puff and puff as sorrow screams from my pores
lifeless and alone...im sick of the devils torture

i want my mind to float off onto paradise island
where everything seems surreal and calming
yet here i am...with my cigarette and a bundle of built up emotions


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Date Submitted: Dec 02, 2008 (11:17 PM)
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  **HOLLA**
12/07/08 (10:02 PM) 
This was beautiful and I think every line was penned to where every single person who reads it could relate... Awww mama, this was dope

  touchdapearl2
12/05/08 (01:16 PM) 
SHIT!!!!! man this was da shit...imsitting here smoking my square at this very moment pumping my fist,fiya write

  LAB **Ms. Cool...
12/03/08 (12:00 PM) 
its suppose to have that key remedy it is suppose to put me at ease yet i puff and puff as sorrow screams from my pores lifeless and alone...im sick of the devils torture, wow. I could picture this.. nicely put together.

  --->ROXIE<---
12/03/08 (09:07 AM) 
damn diamond!! them last 3 lines describes me perfect as im puff puffin away...holy shit!! 4 a non smoker u really captured the exact emotion...this was fuckin dope...a fav.

  .:I WILL NOT B...
12/03/08 (02:08 AM) 
hhmmmm....welll while it does the complete opposite for me I can appreciate the different perspective here.

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