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"Me, Mary Jane, Jack, Coke And Horse {Repost from Previous Page}"
  by Rayve


It all started with Mary Jane
I fucked with her to prove I could hang
She always wore a different color
Purple, blue or some special concotion of another
At the same time I fucked with this dude Jack
I'd hit her then him back to back.
Eventually Mary and Jack became less fun
So Mary and I had a one-on-one
She started talkin about this white hottie
Her girl Coke....... nick named for her body.
Coke usually rented out to the rich and white
But I had her for cheap that night
After a few tastes I needed more
Soon enough I was Coke's whore.
So there I was out on the block
Sellin my ass and takin cock
On my hands and knees suckin dick
Just to pay Coke to get a little sniff.
When my family found out, the couldn't believe it
They left me.... but fuck them.... I got Coke so I don't need shit.
Then Coke introduced my to this nigga Horse
He came and fucked up my life with no remorse
He made me steal from my family and friends.
Be it money, or tv...... if he wanted it, it was his.
Unlike Coke, I couldn't resist Horse very long
I come running back..... with him is where I belong.
Horse was a trip cuz he played with my mind.
He could be evil and yet be sooo kind.
When I had him, I loved him more than life itself
But when I craved him, I NEEDED Him..... he was more important than my heath
I found out that Horse moved, so for days I searched
I found him! Oh shit! What luck!
Horse said I could have him uncut....
I was overjoyed when he said I could have him raw.
But what happened next is something I never saw.
Being with Horse is what I wanted most.
I paid no attention and overdosed.

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Date Submitted: Dec 03, 2008 (02:12 PM)
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  THE REALIST PO...
12/24/08 (08:09 AM) 
Man you put a strong empahsis on this piece! You made a person think outside the box and realize and focus on things that truly happen! I mean damn you have to be a damn good poet to write this and i believe you can be one of the greatest!

  BlessedOne
12/15/08 (10:13 PM) 
Wow! This is such a powerful piece. A story told so poetical and percise. Having friends and relatives that are drug abusers this piece made me sad, but enlightened. You have a gift here and I am glad that you are sharing it.

  Sum-Thyng Like...
12/15/08 (12:37 PM) 
damn

  JokerJay
12/13/08 (09:54 AM) 
damn i write so many poems about out of town girls coming to NYC and gettin' lost in the city with drugs and shit. but this was even better than mines...i love how you make the addictions seem like a relationship. a def fave for me

  Snugasaglove (...
12/07/08 (11:27 PM) 
This is STUPENDOUSLY relevant and poignant!---I am floored by the brutal honesty and so moved by the pain.

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