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"Maybe[I Do]"
  by .Candice.Renee.


Wasn't looking
for love

...but...

lust is love
before trust
and
the love bug
must have
bit us

...or maybe

just me

see...

sometimes
you're just running
cross my mind
making me wish
I could freeze
frame time

and

I

sometimes...

just
miss minor moments
letting memories
majorly effect me

...regretfully...

reliving
a
rewound reality
as your

f a d e d

pictures
smile back
at me

...reluctantly...

remembering
how we'd

play games
&
scream names

then
place blames

...playing...

emotional freeze tag
with our hearts

...having...

manipulative motives
from the start

but somehow...

I got hit with Cupid's
poisonous dart

and..

been silently
hating your ass
since we broke apart
...
maybe what
I'm trying to say
in my own
backwards way
is
.
.
.
I miss you.
========================
Miss You - Aaliyah

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Date Submitted: Aug 19, 2008 (01:56 AM)
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  NINA IS COOL
09/09/08 (01:13 AM) 
this is such an awesome poem. though it makes me reminice about the one i do miss...i love it.

  Blakfiya
08/19/08 (03:21 PM) 
this is smooth and lovely. Thats the vibe that comes across to me. Sucks sometimes.

  mindigoblue
08/19/08 (02:13 PM) 
This is sweet...I really like this --> "lust is love before trust" I probably would have never considered it that way. Being too stoic to even give in to lust at the moment..not having strong belief in love at this time...

  STYLES C.
08/19/08 (11:26 AM) 
Very sweet Candy..

  Syndel
08/19/08 (10:10 AM) 
* been silently hating your ass since we broke apart* now thats a bitch wanting and hating in the same voice love doesnt care how much we resist if its real its going to kick your ass but I love this tough woman being you the soft side is just as beautifuL I can see your lip poked out ...lol

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