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"matching socks"
  by suuwuu


my farther is a gemini
if you know the zodiac signs
that would explain the differences between him and I
our personalities clash
then the problems have to be patched
it's an on going struggle to conversate
I think he's jelous of how I think
because he always wants his way
plus that's what I read,
I'm outspoken
but I'm not going to insult him and ask him if he is
I'm the explorer, the pioneer
his intellectual approach makes sure that I understand
we have issues but if he tried me for a loop hole
we could probably come together as a dynamic duo
he's two sided like androgynous divinity
his competitive side undertones my masculinity
the question is who's taking charge of the situation
as a kid he wasn't there and now the part is too big to play in
I survived with God and mom alone
so I plan to become a better farther to my own
it's like a gift and a curse,
having your opposite sign give you to birth
or maybe it's just the world and how unusual it works...
geminis still get love from a sagittarius, for what it's worth
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Date Submitted: Aug 06, 2008 (07:53 PM)
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  ICE QUEEN
08/20/08 (06:23 AM) 
This piece was beautiful, I read in and was engrossed the whole time.I can indeed see where you are comming from and understand why you feel the way you do. I really enjoyed reading this because it has some depth to it. It was indeed a nice drop.

  RUBY RED DBL R
08/14/08 (08:01 PM) 
i like this poem because it reminds me of me and my mom.... and the dynamics of our relationship, she wasnt there when i was growwing up, she came into my life after i got married and is always complaining about my unconventional lifestyle.... i like the emotions expressed in this one...

  Soul Lyrikal
08/07/08 (09:06 PM) 
Loved this title it was befitting to the soul of this piece....breaking the cycle is the most empowering thing that could ever be done, besides writing such a personal & emotional poem!

  touchdapearl2
08/07/08 (08:02 AM) 
wow....seem like them 2 sided gemini's are mental loners i think,im a taurus and have a friend thats a gemini and we have a battle of the minds everytime,lol

  Demon of Darkn...
08/07/08 (07:59 AM) 
LOVE DIS PIECE AM WIT ROX THO THE TITLE DREW ME... I SOMETIMES SEE THIS AS ME AND MY PAPI AND NOW ME AND MY SON..AT DA MOMENT!! NICE DROP BRA AS EVER IM FEELING DA WAY YOU JUS CAPTURE THE EMOTION WITHIN IT. DK

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