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"Man in the mirror"
  by Lara


Man In The Mirror (Instrumental Version) - Michael Jackson


Starring at your reflection
thinking this is who you are...
but this isn't who you are
it's who you're pretending to be...
Put that gun down man
pick up that book
why don't you read?
knowledge is your power
not how many gun shots you take and surviving after you bleed

That's not what makes you a man
take another look in the mirror...
why you look so mean?
you want people to fear you
so many dudes like you i've seen

That doesnt make you a man....
tell me... do you hear me?
listen to what i'm trying to say ...
i know he hears me cz this man cried today

He stood infront of the mirror
and remembered everything i said
he stood there crying
and said "lucky i'm not dead"

The new man in the mirror put his gun down
picked up his pen
it was his new weapon now.....
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Date Submitted: May 25, 2008 (06:33 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 05/30/08 (04:40 PM)
Author: OGSoldier4God
Poem Title: Another Man In The M...

Date: 05/25/08 (02:54 PM)
Author: Living Legend 2
Poem Title: how can i deny the m...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (32)
  Bestever
10/05/08 (09:58 AM) 
u are a great writer and the music makes this all the more better... Ur intellectual it seems, and that hot for a female... Nice write again:)

  Bec-G
09/22/08 (02:43 AM) 
there is a lot of meaning to this and i dig what you is tryn to say.. what set it off is mikes tune running while ur words are being read.. keep doin yo thang ma

  Geek with a ba...
09/12/08 (09:19 PM) 
the music definately set the mood, i also like the fact that it's positive, honestly its easier to write about the negative. I respect your creativity

  muisq
09/05/08 (09:47 AM) 
damn gurl your deep as hell reminds me of when i had to cope to that realization of life

  AR-15
08/07/08 (09:48 AM) 
very deep, with some strong meaning. I love the approach you wrote in this poem. Great write

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