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"Making Peace."
  by .Candice.Renee.



Come To Me (Peace) - Mary J. Blige


P-raying something can come
from words expressed from bottom
of my cold heart
needing to heal old wounds
before next steps are made

E-rasing past mistakes
w/ new outlooks on a life
we should have been sharing together
instead we parted ways due
to my lack of emotions

A-lways knowing
things could have been much better
than what they are now
abusing your love & trust
I say that a second chance
we should give us

C-reating stronger bonds
beyond boundeies
ignoring previous limitations
beleiving love this strong
could never be hindered

E-moting happiness & joy
still never sure of where the road will lead
but hoping roads never fork again
wishing for nothing more than just

peace...

between me & you....

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Date Submitted: Aug 16, 2008 (02:34 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/16/08 (02:55 AM)
Author: H.H. Holloway
Poem Title: PEACE: Fully

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comment icon  COMMENTS (8)
  LadyMay16
08/19/08 (10:08 AM) 
This is very beautiful Candy Cola...something like a piece of heaven.

  RUBY RED DBL R
08/19/08 (05:42 AM) 
you see you got me still thinking about that guy i told you about in the maybe i do poem, to think that someone who i once love is someone i can look in the face and scream i hate you now is so sad.... this is really making me consider calling him and telling him that we should meet for lunch and make peace....

  .Jaded Noble.
08/17/08 (12:23 PM) 
well I am awake now and I am on your page..... first off I wanna say I loved the acrostic........... very well done......... the emotions displayed are rare these days...for me I rarely meet anyone who expresses themselves so openly yet alone through poetry..... I guess we as people all want that peace of mind and heart because the two coincide with one another like pbnj.... when your mind is diluted you are unable to process feelings and when your feelings are diluted you are unable to think s...
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  Blakfiya
08/16/08 (08:40 PM) 
Love it. Life is too short. Beautifully scribed and thought. Hope its accepted.

  --->ROXIE<---
08/16/08 (04:26 PM) 
AWWW THIS WAS VERY SINCERE...I GOT A GOOD VIBE FROM THIS...

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