GS Poetry Home
Home
GS Blog
Media
Forum
Events
      Poems      Poets      Submit Poems      Collaboetry      SoulCasts     


 
GS Poetry
 
     
           

Your Ad Here

   
  arrow alastor's PREVIOUS POEM alastor's NEXT POEM arrow  
     
     
  
"Ma Boheme"
  by alastor



Thick clouds with wings of leather
scour over heavens smooth atmosphere
they seek to coat the womb of the earth
with cool bohemian dreams of grandeur tread
Off to inhale this red Indian scent that does linger so elegantly
Crawl into the radius of my Mandala
Sit for sale in this wet weather
Flee on the westerly winds
to greet the eastern rising of the circle serpent
This flaming golden ball
reveals the burning in the loins of the gods
I pray they resurrect me from this Persian death
& deliver me from these subterranean bed/head games
© 2000-2009 GS Poetry. All rights reserved.
search icon
Date Submitted: Oct 24, 2008 (11:46 PM)
search icon
Viewed: 36 times
user icon
Rating: Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 (8 Points)
user icon
Poem Favorited By: 0 Members
send the poem to friend
   
     
 
key Log In to rate this poem or add it to your favorites.
 



comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (0)

No poem responses yet. Click here to be the first!!

 


comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  Bella Poetik
11/20/08 (07:35 PM) 
ahhhh, this took me on a mythological journey as i remember references made of a serpent and a golden ball- or golden something *straight face* this was extremely captivating...so enchanting alastor! i love dragons *chuckles* at least that's what this poem made me think of and i absolutely love your wordplay. I love the title of this by the way, so...1800s french *smiles* i would so love to see that style on here

  Sunkissed25
10/29/08 (02:06 PM) 
Marvelous write!!! Beautifully written and the description..just fantastic!!!

  liriklmirikl
10/25/08 (10:20 AM) 
this is cool!i like it the more i digest.terific stuff,look forward to the others.cheers,you have talent id like to hang out with.all the very best from a scot jona dunlop

  J.L
10/25/08 (10:12 AM) 
*bravo* *bravo* I thoroughly enjoyed this read,the choice of words,the flow,everythign abou this was just......magnificent! "Off to inhale this red indian scent that does linger so elegantly" 10,sadly its all I can give.

  Tpoet
10/25/08 (12:11 AM) 
I love this

Page(s): 1 
key Log In to rate or comment on this poem.
     
     
  arrow alastor's PREVIOUS POEM alastor's NEXT POEM arrow  



 
Site Links
About GS Poetry
FAQs
Testimonials
GS Gold Membership
Links
Copyright Information
Contact Us
 
Site Features
Buy Credits
Promote GS
Events
Collaboetry
Soulcast
Poet Search
RSS icon RSS Feeds
 
GSoul Baby-Tees
GSoul Baby-Tees
Support GS and urban poetry by purchasing an official GSoul Baby-Tee. Order Now!
 
Donate
Help GS continue its efforts to maintain a creative and supportive poetry site. Any amount is welcomed and appreciated.
 



© GS Poetry 2000-2008.  All rights reserved. Terms of Use | Privacy