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"luc.i.her .....Lucifer"
  by harley quinn/a fallen angel
  - This Poem is a response to the poem his soul by a fallen angel


Deeming though out
My immoral being
i remember when
I was in his adoring

An untainted angel
In the honor of her king
Before the wingless monkeys
Came to be

Made in his image
that's funny to me (rolling eyes)
he was just bored
And want play things

he gave them a soul
And reasons to be
Gave them free will
Then banished me

Just because i proved to him
Adam's loyalty
That i could have eve
Make Adam eat from the tree

The forbidden fruit
That he told them not to eat
For the tree of all knowing
Was something he thought
They didn't need

They became his new pawns
And i his opponent
In the game of life
A chess match of wit

As we enjoy the incite
That took me
from the foot of his throne
To a kingdom that's all mine

Called by many names
Though out history
Known to him as just Lucy
That's would be the name
he calls me

Luc.i.her ....Lucifer

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Date Submitted: Nov 19, 2008 (02:08 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 11/19/08 (08:42 PM)
Author: Group: ThugLuv Poetry
Poem Title: Luc.i.her ....Lucifer

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  .Always.Catali...
11/19/08 (01:51 PM) 
ok yeah you did write one today...my bad...lol...and what a fuckin magnificent piece it is might I add....broke it down like it was nothing...love it...people act like we dont' know shit bout God cause we admit to our sins...smdh...*muah* J...

  drybaggij
11/19/08 (09:44 AM) 
You murdered this. Like on sum the nigga never had a chance to see the sunlight b4 u capped his ass! I like the story and the concept with relating it to the name break down was bananas.

  JokerJay
11/19/08 (06:48 AM) 
this poem is a fav.

  Esoteric
11/19/08 (03:53 AM) 
OK this the shit! You broke down the devil and how "she" sees humans as monkeys with no wings and how it angers her that God loves them more. Damn I'm digging this and your view towards it. "he gave them a soul and reasons to be gave them free will then banished me"..... I'm tripping how you wrote this to actually sympathize with the devil and make one actually think that maybe we betrayed God worse than the devil did because our loyalty with him was broken in the beginning. It also says that we...
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