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"Loyalty Shifted 2 A Verb"
  by Sum-Thyng Like a Poet


Talk about the noun

Loyalty

Ask me it
Should
Have been a
Verb
Because she be shifting

Trustfulness

Swiftly

Sneakily Introducing
Lack of caution
Directly
Aiming at heads

Out of sight out of mind
Dead Quick is

Me

One shot
They got
Like
Cort did in the
Quick and the Dead

THEY
MY Alliance

See We broke bread

Ass.u.me

Faithfulness

({BUT})

Fickle is what became

Making

U

More
Of
An

ASS

Then

ME

Turned
Loyalty into a bitch
Until it
Became a verb
Labeled

Hurt

And the only loyal thing
That remained the same is
discredit
Because it always come In the 11th hour
So call
Me
A
Smart Dumb Motherfucker
Because
They
Don’t think I Know
THEY
Turned treacherous
Making more of an
ASS
Out of U
Then Me
Because
You They
Think From
Me
Loyalty remains a noun

**** Get The Fuck Out Of Here!! ****






Lost Ones - Jay Z
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Date Submitted: Jul 25, 2008 (12:59 PM)
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  HARLEMFINEST
08/04/08 (10:57 AM) 
....LUVIN' UR WORDPLAY...UR METHAPHORS ARE PRECISE....CONCEPT ON POINT..ALOT OF ORIGINALITY IN DIS PIECE....HUH?"LOYALTY A VERB"..FOR SOME THAT'S WHAT IT IS...FAKE ASS NIGGAHS(MALE& FEMALE)LOL

  .Mase Da Rula.
08/03/08 (12:25 AM) 
u aint never lied.. loyalty is what i hold dear.. and it sucks these dfays too few can be it...........

  Ms. Sincerious
07/31/08 (09:38 AM) 
ooooooooooooooh... this one right here struck chords with me.. like crazy.. loved theowrdplay in this and THAT TRACK.. whew.. great scribe

  Jody
07/29/08 (03:14 AM) 
lol, might have to go with Liq on this one... lol, na but I'm being more trusting... enjoyed.

  mindigoblue
07/28/08 (02:04 PM) 
Wow...now this is really an excellent commentary on the word. Loyalty as a verb. Much validity to that miss. Youreally broke this down nicely with personal touches to make your point complete. You never truly account for other people. Guess there's a few of us that you could count as one of those smart dumb mofos...great piece.

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