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"Low }{2}{ High"
  by ...Da RiDdLeR F0rT...


“…Allegorical introspection

Peering through soulful windows

Lost in translation

Seeking some connection

A close relation

Seeing . HER . perspective

= . UNPROTECTED . =

Defining . HER . inner world

. E Y E. . 2 . .E Y E.

Envisioning . HER . identity

Who . SHE . is inside

. HER . mind shields no disguise.

But he wants to get her up

So they can both soar so HIGH…”

::-----------------------------------------::

…peering

D

O

W

N


[ 2 ]



decades…


………….[ e N s L a V e D ]


depressive lessons

admiration

--- universe ---

riddled with stars

………………………………….revolving

{{{ amidst }}}

quality quantum questions

………sickening…………… sorrow

brutally borrowed

from

f

a

l

l

e

n

peacock feathers

her mentality teeters


: : U N B A L A N C E D : :


in between

- stable & fatal -

sentiments

mirrors

. hopes .

visions

. ideas .

resentments


……..c

……a

………..s

…..c

………….a

……….d

…..e


her persona

[a ]

………………….loner

vision

[ miserable]

mistress

tightly


[ W R A P P E D ]


in

unwanted

( ( ( ( . solitude. ) ) ) )

daring


+ 2 +

compare


!! P a N g S !!


+ 2 +

none

standing

on

the

- v - - e - - r - - g - - - e -

of

suicidal love

blinding

like

the

……………….off

shore

:: S U N ::

.=====================.


strolling

near

5000 foot

imaginary


…c

………..l

…..i

……………….f

………..f

……..s



{ awaiting }

pivotal winds

[of ]

disappointment…………….

2

gut feeling

………………s0o0o0o0o0o0o

morally
…………..despondent

internally
misplaced

her


I n N e R .------. v I s A g E


…………………..s H u D d E r S…

….....................................................................…c O V e R s…

!! torment !!

freedom

……………..lost

belief system

……………………………clouded

eternally……..

[……….shrouded……….]

[in]

infinite

...m

…….i

………..s

…………..e

………………r

……………………y

quenching

her
thirst

through

temporary actions


excepted lust


[ k n o w I n g]


the
consequences

still

the

ill

[ meaning ]

of

[ a ]

manhood
phallus

-------- THRUST -----

fulfills

but

kills

dreams
[ of ]
being



[ .RELEASED. ]



Soo0o00o0o0oo……………..

she’s


e M p T I e D


. physically .

. sexually .

. mentally .

.
.
.
.
.

instant gratification

satisfaction conclusion

temptation

sweaty hourly actions

……………………………..supplying


[ NO ]


permanent

………………..peace………………

only
showers

domestic adornment

disillusioned beast

examined


H E R


………... desire .


H E R

……………………. passion .


embers

elements

swarm

. ============================================= .


N o t h I n g s


T a B 0 o


from
the
sight

[ of ]



H E R


dark
pupils



E Y E S


never lie

no
surprise

he resisted

her life being further twisted

so he gave her
his affection

as a life lift ticket

[2 ]

get them
both


.UP.

…saving her existence….


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Date Submitted: Sep 25, 2008 (12:12 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  Isis sun
09/29/08 (02:34 PM) 
Agree with Rox-Z -- this had me floating, falling, tossing, yearning, needing...I'm resisting right now...

  Jody
09/28/08 (02:31 PM) 
what? this was wild and I enjoyed! The unraveling of this piece is tight and almost stepping into her shoes and feelings... love this.

  Soul Lyrikal
09/26/08 (03:30 PM) 
I LOVE this...when I read something back 2 back 3 times in a row...you just take me on prose journeys...I always enjoy your work!

  --->ROXIE<---
09/25/08 (10:12 PM) 
DAMN, DAMN, DAMN FORT....I SWEAR I READ THIS AND THOUGHT OF MYSELF...DAMN SHAME HOW MUCH I RELATE TO THIS...DID U SNEAK IN MY BRAIN WHILE I WAS SLEEP?? CTFU....I GOTTA FAV THIS....

  Blakfiya
09/25/08 (06:47 PM) 
spectacular man. Visually appealing as well as some food for thought.

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