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"Lovers Commence"
  by alastor



Twilight gripped the two lovers swirling them
casting out dwindling hesitance
By this time patience was there folly
I beg they capture the season of blue haze
present in her eyes
There was a vast distance in their cold silence,
it filled the clouds pale migrant cheeks
At this moment a barren void was to be filled,
Swollen with rapture!
With natural consent & shameless gazing
time climbed on their shoulders
and toured the night
on wings of altruistic love
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Date Submitted: Oct 24, 2008 (05:44 PM)
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  IndiaNicole
11/21/08 (03:48 PM) 
intense with sweetness and love. great write, 10starz

  Bella Poetik
11/20/08 (07:56 PM) 
and the metaphors are just phenomenal!!!

  Bella Poetik
11/20/08 (07:56 PM) 
encore encore! *deep, contented sigh* this spoke to my very heart and chartered it away to some distant land lol i'm sorry but it's true lol i cannot tell you how much i appreciate your work dear alastor! it is poets like you that keep me afloat and my imagination and love for literature alive! bless you and your beautiful soul for it shines candescent in this!

  Lady Shandz
11/07/08 (07:27 PM) 
wowwww nice nice nice poem. amazing choice of words and syntax. it was a really good write. keep it going. :)

  PanthaG
10/25/08 (10:56 AM) 
of tha radar for hotness factor... :)

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