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"Love-pulmonary resuscitation"
  by B-Y
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Love Ain't Fo Da Kid by biscuit


Don't let these niggas bring your love to a end
Because Toni Braxton told us it was ok to breathe again
We can't have you being a victim of Complicated Love
In cardiac arrest...many will protest that love can't be explained
Nor ignored...so let's thaw out your heart that was one jagged
Because no nigga will take your heart and FRANCHISE TAG IT
Those aren't the men you need in your life....in order to breathe,
You should be in tune with your "Star Player" in order to achieve
The love and happiness cure so you won't be diagnosed
With an irregular heart beat..you just need a jumpstart
and resuscitation of the heart as well as the brain
So you could signal your vital organs can make you love again....
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Date Submitted: Dec 03, 2008 (10:02 AM)
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  Buffy
12/21/08 (04:41 AM) 
i am diggin this big time. it's short but hott fa real. u surely can't let the heart die!

  ButterflyDream
12/12/08 (09:03 PM) 
A very good response piece....glade that there are still some real men left in the world.

  AR-15
12/12/08 (09:26 AM) 
The heart can be cold, but still alive.. but another strong piece here, loved that "Breathe Again" reference.. Nicely written

  poetrys poet
12/11/08 (06:17 AM) 
son wow if they aint like dis response they dont like they self fam this was so ill my nig ya words was grasping son great piece and thanx fa sharing

  BlessedOne
12/09/08 (03:01 PM) 
This is a nice piece. With all of the metaphors needed to express and encourage this process.

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