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"Love-Lost and Found"
  by ephemeral


Hearts left broken
Unassisted
Growing sharp thorns
Becoming twisted
Warmth dissipated
Icy hearts
Fisted
Striking out
All traces
Of the
Love that
Existed

Hurt
Then brought pain
To loves domain
Revisiting
Its losses
While
Dispelling
Its gains

Lonely and confused
Love left
Abused
and
Beaten down
With memories
Of being misused

Blind and stumbling
Along paths
Of deceit
Love finally
Found hope
In a heart
That still beat
With warmth and caring
Dreaming dreams
Worth sharing
This heart opened
It’s door
Saving love
From defeat


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Date Submitted: Aug 01, 2008 (06:27 PM)
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  LyricallyDelic...
08/12/08 (04:02 PM) 
I loved this write and your flow was infectious.. I needed a happy ending today.

  the struggle
08/05/08 (11:30 PM) 
okay, I had actually read this a few days ago but didn't really have words for it, so lets try this again, lol. Now I'm not an overly emotional person, but this one did make want to tear up (just a bit). To think that something which is inherently innocent abused and misused by others, brought to the point of where it seems like there's nothing left...and then that ending. I'm a visual person so I guess it seems more real to me 'cause I can kind of see the scenarios the words depict playing o...
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  Beautiful Soul
08/02/08 (11:10 AM) 
I read this two ways, both still leaving room for hope in love...One being you losing your heart to someone but realizing that if you look deep and long enough, your heart is still in tact and the other way being that someone elses heart, losing it but with the last stanza almost made it seem as tho you finding love by someone else giving you their heart, which now belongs to you...sort of like a new beginning...enjoyed this in every way

  ASympl3Diamond
08/01/08 (11:42 PM) 
"Lonely and confused Love left Abused and Beaten down With memories Of being misused"---now that seems to be some reoccuring shit for me *deep sigh* at times i feel as though love has been defeated with in only to leave me emotionally lonesome

  .Candice.Renee...
08/01/08 (08:38 PM) 
loving this much... :) being still hopeful in the end. i tend not to view it like that though.

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