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"Love To The Third Degree"
  by DEATH


(read this poem regular, then reread it, skipping every line, then, reread it again, starting with the second line, skipping every line) {pattern 1: 1,2,3,4...; pattern 2: 1,3,5,7...; pattern 3: 2,4,6,8...}

I notice that your glow happens to shine so bright
A pure honor to be in your perfect grace
Like a speeding bullet, like a rocket ship, like the speed of light
I come to your every call, with nothing but pure haste

How about the speed a jet has before it beings its flight
I even love how fast you get on my case
I too move fast, to be near you, I’d love to be you knight
And oh… the temptation you indulge my body in by touching my face

You’re the only person I’d rescue with all my might
And I’ll come where ever you want me to come, any place
You raise me to an unimaginable height
If I was a building, you’d be my foundation, my base

The sex has been great every single night
Even when you spread you legs, I love the taste
Nothing new thou, my fire was something you could always ignite
The sex is never too fast or too slow, just the right pace

Daydreaming about the day you walk down the isle in all white
Over the years, when the game seemed lost, you’ve been my winning ace
Because, you with my last name just sound right
So, no time spent with you is ever a waste

(Which one do you like the most?)
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Date Submitted: Feb 18, 2008 (09:55 AM)
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  Candy Girl
04/15/08 (08:33 AM) 
DAMN! i cant really say nothin about this, you just straight killing these poems! 10 starz and a fav

  mstwest
04/10/08 (06:50 PM) 
i liove all of it i've never seen a poem like this one before. it was hot your a true writer. if i had to pick one i'd say the first one which is the whole thing cause itwas of the chain on the real. 10 starz. and of corse its a favorite. i would love to write withyou one day. i think you could teach me some things.

  Kei
04/08/08 (01:21 PM) 
I really love them all but #2 was my favorite

  KrazySexiiKool
04/04/08 (12:04 AM) 
damn...the fact that all three made sense is WHOA! but definitely my fav is all of it togetha cus love encompasses all and u got it buddy

  llovely
03/07/08 (12:47 AM) 
brough, im in some deep turmoil right now. i dont even know what to say. is it number two or numba three that im into. man, numba threes got that flow that just reels the reader in while the ending of numba two just kilt it. i cant decide. i say both. sry

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