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"Love story (The Begining)"
  by Noir


When we first met, it was so easy 4 us 2 connect.
We sat n laid back and had interesting chats.... We talked about GOD amd what we would do when times got hard.
We made plans for the future and I use ta
Pray and dream about u and me growing older and raising a family.
We had that light that spark, when people walked by
They could only remark,
"They are in LOVE"
Then I took u... Naw wait a minute U took me
I dont remeber but,
The sex was magnifecently in tune like lips to a spoon,
or art, maybe Mozart.
Time went on and things fell apart
Our love started 2 be dilluted or should I say polluted
U put 2 much faith n me
And I tried 2 be what U wanted me 2 be
Remember I was your everything when I Shouldnt have been
Im not GOD and by the time I realized that it was 2 late
U were long gone.
Sometime I sit back and laugh ...Naw I cry and ask GOD
Y
Y would U let me fall in love and He replied......
My son................ Im not a good typer so ill finish the rest of the story LATER.
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Date Submitted: Feb 01, 2007 (10:47 AM)
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  mrs pruitt
11/29/08 (11:37 AM) 
LOVVVVVVVVE IT 10

  RedLoveSong
09/26/08 (05:47 PM) 
That was nice, guess now I have to read the ending....tease...

  WIZ
09/14/08 (10:36 PM) 
FEELING THIS COMPLETELY! VERY AWLSOME INDEED!

  Rox
08/21/08 (03:26 AM) 
I'm feeling this piece right here. Been there and done that. We as humans have a bad tendency in putting our faith in people, in man, when we should be paying attention to God's plan. I had to learn the hard way, feeling as though I couldn't live, breath, or eat if I didn't have dude in my life ...boy was I wrong, God showed me how to love him, how to love me, and the difference between wanting someone in my life and "thinking" that I NEED someone in my life! Feeling your style, a great poet you...
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  Sum-Thyng Like...
08/21/08 (02:13 AM) 
Wonderful

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