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"Love Should've Brought You Home"
  by jawillis


You were with her
At the restaurant
Eating talking laughing
As I emptied the plates
Of cold food
That I’d prepared
Your favorite . . .
Love should’ve brought you home

But you were with her
At her place
Touching talking teasing
Preparing to unlock
The keys to her extasy
As I waited up
Anticipating the turn
Of your key
In the door . . .
Love should’ve brought you home.

As I slept
You stroked
As I cried
You moaned
You were with her
Doing all the things
You could’ve done
To me . . .
Love should’ve brought you home
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Date Submitted: Nov 21, 2008 (02:12 PM)
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  Moz' Wizdom
11/21/08 (04:33 PM) 
Heartfelt, revealing, and echoed in the hearts of many... sad, but true. Very nice write.

  leezymleezy
11/21/08 (03:20 PM) 
This is hot....seriously....the repetition was used perfectly to get ur point across...."Love should’ve brought you home"...for some reason that line sticks in my head

  smooch
11/21/08 (03:13 PM) 
wow this was a sad deep piece and its sad but i can relate to you on dis

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