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"Love At Second Sight (Looking Deeper)"
  by Ms. Sincerious


*ThugLuv Challenge- A Pic Is Worth A Thousand Words -13 line challenge*


Looking opposite of me.. you looked like the opposite of me.
Like day and nite, black and white, differences seen clearly…

Compelled by curiosity, we cautiously explored the deeper sides of we.
Digging beneath shallow surfaces to discover something beautiful was waiting.

Boundaries became mere memories as we threw caution to the wind.
Let our hearts fall where they may, and enjoy the falling in

Nothing even mattered as we watched the world disappear from above.
Flying high cuz feelings like those are what fairytales are made of.

It’s been said that opposites attract – and we made it a fact
Never would’ve guessed that you’d be my other half

Meaning: I never would’ve imagined that you’d make me feel complete.

You made me believe in “Love at second sight”…
And it was magically delicious as we went half on love that nite…




Nothing Even Matters - Lauryn Hill (Featuring DAngelo)

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Date Submitted: Nov 28, 2008 (06:02 PM)
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  Lyric Sol
12/19/08 (04:44 PM) 
"As we went half on love that nite" that's what's up...Good wrtie ma' keep pin pushin'

  ASympl3Diamond
12/05/08 (01:36 AM) 
grrrrr see me being on my depression slump i missed this =( "Nothing even mattered as we watched the world disappear from above. Flying high cuz feelings like those are what fairytales are made of. It’s been said that opposites attract – and we made it a fact Never would’ve guessed that you’d be my other half Meaning: I never would’ve imagined that you’d make me feel complete"---i love! this was beautifully written

  Bella Poetik
12/02/08 (08:42 PM) 
awwwww you're absolutely killing me with these delicious, romantic pieces- stop encouraging me to get all sappy lol *sighs* here i was at the beginning of the day ready to sink and go gothic- death and shit LOL but you've convinced me otherwise ma, you are truly an inspiration *big smile* i love your work!

  .:I WILL NOT B...
11/30/08 (02:22 AM) 
man...I was just telling Roxie how it's funny how two people who are so different can gravity towards each other so intensely. it's amazing but it's so beautiful. nicely scribed Sin. *smiles*

  --->ROXIE<---
11/29/08 (10:04 AM) 
It’s been said that opposites attract – and we made it a fact Never would’ve guessed that you’d be my other half <----i can so relate to this right now =) and that last line was beautiful

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