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"LOST-FIND-(double acrostic)"
  by KiNg-Go0B3r


Learning how to survive with out going pooF
On my guard every day, punjabi im a giant like khalI
Selecting weapons, as i gather my materials for my plaN
Time to put it in action, tonights this war may never enD


lost in the woods i am
i must find my self, become one with my center
and release my chi, the wilderness is not a gentle places
danger lurks every where
and i must stay on my guard if i want to survive
or they will over take me and eat me whole.....and alive
so i plan, waiting for them to move, which then i make my move
traps set, spring up, and suprise my enemies
i continue to move foward, bodys bloodied
mangled, severed, chared, split, decimated
...but if man wishes to live.....he must prove he is the dominant species..
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Date Submitted: Jul 19, 2008 (01:03 PM)
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  Blakfiya
07/20/08 (01:25 AM) 
ok..now you getting serious. Always watch your back...and your front too.....funny ish springs up all the time.

  harley quinn/a...
07/20/08 (12:17 AM) 
very nicely done .....great words

  African Queen
07/19/08 (02:30 PM) 
this is a big change from your previous writes and i must say the big step was a great and well done!! you still can do it biggg....10*s!

  N~Tyce
07/19/08 (01:45 PM) 
wow this is fiyah right here! i've never tried double acrostic but you did a wonderful job with it. keep it coming. 10!

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