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"Lost ONE"
  by cookedcoke02


Pounding-Heart
Once-Started

Calmly- Couldn't Finish
Suddenly- Blurry Image

Nearly-Lost It
Shortly-Found It

Slowly-Misplaced It
Slightly-Erased It

Gladly-Replaced It
Courageous-Didn't Chase It

Owned up and Faced It
Simply Basic

Finally Outsmarted
No Longer Warm-Hearted

Dearly Departed
Back Where It Once Started
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Date Submitted: Jun 19, 2008 (12:49 PM)
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  StraY12
12/12/08 (04:44 PM) 
hmmm I already read this...I must be slackin'...LMAO

  StraY12
12/12/08 (04:44 PM) 
This was nice, I'm feelin' the back and forth you used, kept it consistent, and easy to understand, not like errythin' else is so complex...well you know what i mean, I'm feelin' this tho', very nice piece of work!

  poetriboi
11/24/08 (02:00 PM) 
ypu had a madd flow, and it makes you think. keep it up

  bookum
11/10/08 (11:22 AM) 
damn i really like this write...and the concept was amazing..u did your thing..mos def 10 starrzz

  AR-15
10/31/08 (12:05 PM) 
Very interesting piece here.. loved the flow from start to finish a well written write

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