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"Look into mine"
  by drybaggij


Open Your Eyes - Snow Patrol

From angry to blank faced to let's get it on
To hasty to love struck to just hold me tonight
When it's debate night all beef like right or wrong
and definitely when I've got mine shut like most nights

Keep them pretty eyes open
I walk around blind sometimes
Heed these words I've spoken
Don't confuse it as mere rhymes

Last time I'll try this, I'll give you a guide, a manual
A blueprint to me. Step by step like walk through
All you have to do is open your eyes to see it through
And memorize the pages dedicated to pleasing you

A miracle providing mind medicine providing man amazing, in prick guise.
Unmask the sleeping giant and look into mine, but first, open your eyes...

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Date Submitted: Nov 19, 2008 (12:02 PM)
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  Jody
11/20/08 (01:30 AM) 
Enjoyed. first two lines are prob my fav, love the opening!

  LadyMay16
11/19/08 (03:45 PM) 
Pleasently pretty pieces penned Making mind mushy!

  --->ROXIE<---
11/19/08 (02:30 PM) 
ah them last 2 lines made me smile... =) beautiful J...

  .Always.Catali...
11/19/08 (12:20 PM) 
awwww that's all mushy and stuff....never heard the song before though...I think I like...might be stealing from a media tracker myself very soon...

  Blakfiya
11/19/08 (12:15 PM) 
Very plaintive piece. To be viewed with open eyes acknowledging your want to please. To unearth your intentions, though confusing they may first appear. Sweet, if the secret can be unlocked.

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