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"Long Live the Microcosm"
  by alastor



Was his one life suffice?
Strangle
Torment
Emotion’s outlet
The illusion pagoda links us
Desperation
Intolerance
Flirtation
The draping fluctuation of human experiences
Fat with Paradox Parabolas Parallax
Comedies & Tragedies
Pill poppers Uppers & Downers
Conquerors & leapers of snake pit doubt
on the other hand are twitching susceptibles
Gapped faithe keep me in your sanctuary of wombs/wounds
Humanity’s plaguing dreams of triumph afloat w/ clouds of hope
Mope with the bowels of Wall st. down slopes
Intestines flow
Sour groves
Peace flees in stomping droves
The earth’s filled with homicidal mutants
induced into the azure drenched skies & sliver meadows
The blue belly roams the occult of our daily bread
Eagle’s nebula
A lovely garden of women
Pillars of creation
Mass population of petaled-girls on kind feet
A paradised ghetto
A foolish ghost herd ecosystem
Saharan dust incorporates Caribbean diseases
who mock the sea hurricaned-lung
The Indian summer’s swelling with the growth of distant death
Marching
Charging with glass hooves
Anno Domini I cry, I tear to love you
One last time
Give me one true love, One I can sacrifice
The unleashed spirit dissipates in the rupture of current revelations
X-ray emotions simply portrayed meshes with smooth sex
A sheltering placebo Sweet like sugar
Salty as dead sea tears who costume soft cheeks & rinse them clean with purity
Opens up glossy ecstasy
Seals perpetual scars
Soothes the nervous system
Twists the already tangled path of life
Endless doors
Endless channels
Endless entanglements
Woven at the copious nerve’s sensitive endings
Received finally in the copper corridor of the mind
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Date Submitted: Oct 24, 2008 (05:35 PM)
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  Bella Poetik
11/21/08 (08:46 AM) 
philosophical*

  Bella Poetik
11/21/08 (08:45 AM) 
i've read this a few times learning something new each time. You have such an extensive vocab, so very learned and i must admit, you lose me sometimes because there are so many thoughts going on at once- there is so much imagery in this that i have to dwell on lines abit before i can move on to fully grasp this. I tried to read this concentrating on the words alone because you already know that this is a very complexed write- then i read trying to capture the tone and emotion. The two tones/emot...
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  liriklmirikl
10/25/08 (10:37 AM) 
brilliant writing.enogh said.more power to your words,jona

  Tpoet
10/24/08 (06:07 PM) 
geat write

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