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"LONELINESS OF NIGHT AND I"
  by buklaws


Earth in silence and blanked with shadows,
laden with skies pregnated with misty clouds,
wind freshens,ecstatic breeze whirl about the water meadows,
it will be cold this night,it holds no doubt.

Night is terribly lonely,where hide the stars and moon?
I myself, i am lonely,darling,my love ,where are you?

Everyman and beast sound asleep,nut i am awake
thinking of my love,the one i miss,
i have been wallowing in reminisce of the treasured memory of you and me,
till now,i have not even seen you in my pillow kiss,
darling,darling,where have you been?

Night is too cold,and you are too far away from being hold,
i hold tight the pillow;i had a thought of our passionate snog,
now i know,love is two loves in just oe soul;
sadly for so long,we haven't had our pillow talk.

Darling my darling,
night is terrible lonely and longs for the break of dawn,
sooner,sooner than later,
my heart longs to see you come!
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Date Submitted: May 06, 2008 (05:25 AM)
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  Nessie
07/02/08 (11:07 AM) 
That was beautiful... and very wonderfully written.... Nice piece! :)

  Red Dragon
07/02/08 (10:40 AM) 
what a deep poem you put together right here, this is great and creative

  Nilla
06/05/08 (05:16 AM) 
like the feeling of.. need..? in this piece, hun. nicely penned. ten stars.

  shyeboogie
06/05/08 (05:15 AM) 
nice....i've been there befor ....love how its easy to relate to ur write ...10 stars

  honeydipz1
06/01/08 (12:44 PM) 
awwww this is so sweet i'm liking this 10 starz

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