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"living verse"
  by ataraxia
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Verse2Life {J@y's Song} *Also On Main Page* by Group: ThugLuv Poetry


traveling
mind wires
connecting thought bits
split directionless
fitting
wrongly these endless
deliveries of possibility passels

wrapped up false
made into mad molds
as a myriad of ways,
some under dug
climbing over until
overrun they're
pending us,

inhale, as
surfacing
finally free to be
descendants of
descending into sudden
down
tries and breathe
he crafted caught
held me
holding still
hand extended
spirit gifted with another
chance and then again
gradually become move
trying on balance

minds make themselves up
to maybe win solace
or something nameless
or moreover gain back
our shapeless to better
save this
to better
shape this
absence

does and yet dull
and choked are choices
filled with pointless
willful wanting self
limits to empty into
all that gain obtained
to lose the gifting
within

as in this
the what of it was
what had me in mind
of right
but held on long for
too tight
those yesterdays still
stinging
clinging
and they dare to
smear nights
mar morning
steal songs
wilt ways
and so same
stays

today locks
our almost shut doors
and hides behind open
where from behind
awaits ways
to new ways
or other ways,
or away ways

and i hurry into
hush and still am held
praying and holding
hope stroking
love evoking
faith falters
and
still falling
caught always
i pray
for right ways
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Date Submitted: Sep 30, 2008 (01:25 AM)
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  kinnaird
11/21/08 (10:07 AM) 
very well written. great content and concept. deep in thought.

  J@yBoogz••.•'¯...
10/01/08 (12:32 AM) 
Ahhh this was Insane!!! Love this response!..."inhale, as surfacing finally free to be descendants of descending into sudden down tries and breathe he crafted caught held me holding still hand extended spirit gifted with another chance and then again gradually become move trying on balance"<---Bananas!!!

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