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"Live In The Sky"
  by L!L M!ZZ ST@XZ 313
  - This Poem is a response to the poem R.I.P Jordan by baby girl oo7


We are all
Going to miss you
I cant belive
That you are away from me
That your life was taken
Away so violently
How could the person
do this to me
To everybody
i am internally damged
Permanetly
As I write this poem
I feel an empty space
Deep within my heart
Even though you are gone
Know that no one can take your place
When you were here
Our bond was so strong
Nothing could tear us apart
But now you are gone
You made your way
To your heavenly home
Now when its my turn
To move
To the skies
I want to be standign right with you
Being protected through the lords eyes

Live In The Sky (Instrumental) - T.I. Ft. Jamie Foxx
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Date Submitted: Jul 23, 2008 (09:29 AM)
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  yonnie_313
08/22/08 (06:28 PM) 
wow

  D3TR01TPHR3SH ...
08/21/08 (01:55 PM) 
DAMN ma this was a nice tribute to ya homeboy he should be lookin down at you smilling keep up the good work 10 stars and a fav

  Dha YoUnq`n
08/20/08 (02:13 PM) 
WOw!!! This poem wuz sad but u did ya thanq...i kno how u feel....i recently loss sumone so i can relate.. 10 starsz

  Ye Cre
08/15/08 (10:57 AM) 
Beautiful way to mourn a loss...My Condolences to you...Stay Blessed

  tamara843chuck...
07/24/08 (09:39 AM) 
i love this poem it makes me think of all ma family members and friends who died and they live in the sky and im lovin dis poem

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