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"Listen 2 my words-Part 6"
  by BxGrL
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Listen 2 My Words Part-5 by Quite


Listen 2 my words, while I show you I care
Let me give you my hand, help you deal with the pain
Sincerity and honesty are what I see in your words
Keep them up, it's another way to cope
I am here to help you with your fears
Life is something we all need to deal
Don't worry, I understand your pain
My father doesn't love me either, he has lost his gain
Don't crucify yourself for your father's sins
His burden shouldn't be your shame
I am here to show you that we are the same
And poetry flows through our veins
Listen 2 my words, while I give you comfort
His mistakes will not be your own
For you are a man I am proud to call a brotha
So cheer up, things can be worst.....
Use these words to deal with the mental thirst
Hold your head up high and Just listen 2 my words
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Date Submitted: Dec 01, 2008 (06:22 AM)
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  MR. BYRD
12/01/08 (10:42 AM) 
this was a great motivational poem....i love the response...10

  Quite
12/01/08 (10:31 AM) 
cool amd i appreciate this write very nice

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