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"Liquid Heart"
  by Kat Nicole


If I had a heart full of liquid I could pour you a cup of my pain and heartaches...
My highs and
....................my lows
If my heart was full of liquids I could pour you a cup and let you sip on thee taste of rejection that is permantely lodged in my taste buds
If my heart was full of liquids I could allow you to drink my blood stain juices of lies and deception
from lovers, loved ones and friends
If my heart was a liquid I could pour that cup down the drain and pour a fresh cup
complete with new emotions and feelings.
If my heart was a liquid I would pour you a pitcher of weakness, fears and doubts
All hidden behind the facade of their polar opposities..
If my heart was a liquid everytime someone spit me out from their disgust at my taste I could easily grab a Bounty sheet and clean up the mess they left behind
S c a t t e r e d pieces and confused splatters
But....


my heart isn't a liquid
Its a solid block of concrete
Full of cracks and worn spots from heavy
footsteps stomping on it over the years
So I'm sorry its impossible for me to pour my heart out to you now
You maybe should've caught be before
this block was created
Molded
Hardened
And maintained...

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Date Submitted: Jul 21, 2008 (09:54 PM)
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  dee_bagz
08/01/08 (01:22 PM) 
this poem made me imagine a lot, i like how you metaphorically flip the script at the end that was hot do yo thang!!

  TheInfamousBab...
07/31/08 (07:20 PM) 
OMG... I'm feelin this piece all around. Love how you flipped the script in the end... Keep that pen movin. Deep write. 10

  DOMINICANPOET
07/23/08 (02:49 PM) 
deep the beginning really is what made this and that is a strong point because if you can start hard your definatly gone end hard as you showed in this piece ten from me keep em coming mami

  Poetic Lyricis...
07/23/08 (11:02 AM) 
I can feel the sentiment in this joint and the flow is right on point..Do ya thing poet..ez 10

  TonySouthern
07/22/08 (01:33 PM) 
Just like Dawn stated this was deep. Sorry that you are Molded and Hardened where one should have a soft spot. Nice write mi spitta. one love

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