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"Like a Pest"
  by Lady Shandz


Too close
Too close
But too far away
Make up your mind

Too clingy
Oh, but the ways you entice me
What choice do I have?
But to cling to the force that pulls me to you

Too sensitive
But the way you make me feel
Requires sensitivity in the heart
Requires feeling

Too much
Such am I
A burden unto you?
Then let me go and continue your life

Why not rid of me?
You say all of the above
Like I am a pest
With more annoyance than love

Because you care
You cannot rid a person who had your heart bound
Who makes you feel above the world
Complete
Yet you say I am like a pest
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Date Submitted: Nov 07, 2008 (06:40 PM)
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  PoeticSoulja
11/09/08 (07:29 PM) 
From his perspective there is a thin line between concern and annoyance. One would have to maintain a balance just to satisfy his needs. The message of this poem can truly be applied to real life relationships.

  A.C.H.
11/09/08 (06:56 PM) 
A guy always wants his girl around and if she isn't always around he gets worried. An excellent write! Much luv! - "the inspired one"

  alastor
11/07/08 (07:32 PM) 
Magnetism has it's conflicting contrasts. like opposites attract. negativity & positivity aligned. love to me is an unconquerable farce that we all endure in order to be able to touch the hearts we want to possess. i really like the conflict within this poem

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