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"Lightening Love"
  by lisaloveslyrics



life has given obstacle courses that where filled with traps and pit falls but i always
managed to dodge them all but i have landed on a mine filled with explosive emotions
i slowly lifted my foot off the detonator and my body from the bottom of my feet to the tip of head was filled with hot fiery emotions. shock was the initial reaction but as the sting subsided i realized how much i really enjoyed the feeling! The feeling of being in love. it was a feeling that i once claimed to feel but nothing compared to how i was feeling when he held my hand or when he kissed my lips. His touch alone took me on trips to places that i never been! I hope this feeling never grows weak...because live without him would be like a child with no parents or the summer without sun and that's just no fun!
his love struck like lightening but i hope it last like eternity!
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Date Submitted: Oct 10, 2008 (04:01 PM)
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  big josh
12/24/08 (07:56 PM) 
yo dat was hot I can relate to dis , 10s

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