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"LIFE?...WHAT IS THAT?"
  by Group: ThugLuv Poetry


A PICTURE IS WORTH A THOUSAND WORDS
-THUGLUV CHALLENGE-
13 LINES ONLY



my lips are cracked in the form of a smile....
but as the word "LIFE" is repeated over and over
my smile fades away causing it to turn upside down as happiness for that word...
no longer plays for the truth of what it is and sits on top on my brain Indian style

LIFE?
the word of perfect imperfections..
some ride left while others are on right and some trapped in the middle
however, whats said to be a joy quickly turns to sorrow
as days pass and more bliss deteriorates...
my cheeks set in place for each following tomorrow

ill laminate my face so when tears shed...
i will not be ruined by the liquid dreams of false hope and failed dedication

for i shall continue on.. with LIFE... of permanent pain..no joy... simply...destiny's toy

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Date Submitted: Nov 30, 2008 (08:26 PM)
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  KiNg-Go0B3r
12/02/08 (05:38 PM) 
daamnn.....im only smilin at this because i kno fo sure ya ass is alive, but damn at the words thats been wrote

  **HOLLA**
12/01/08 (06:58 PM) 
Damn Diamond... you always do this shit up like no other, LIKE NO OTHER, you truly have this challenge on LOCK BIOTCH!!! UGH!

  Ms. Sincerious
12/01/08 (09:46 AM) 
"LIFE? the word of perfect imperfections.. some ride left while others are on right and some trapped in the middle however, whats said to be a joy quickly turns to sorrow as days pass and more bliss deteriorates... my cheeks set in place for each following tomorrow ".. damn DIAMOND, i can always count on you to flip some shit with these challenges.. this was no less amazing than Ive come to expect from you.. glad to have you back..we've missed you.

  .:I WILL NOT B...
11/30/08 (10:34 PM) 
"ill laminate my face so when tears shed... i will not be ruined by the liquid dreams of false hope and failed dedication"......wow!! this was the part that touched me the most. I felt these lines so deep within mama. damn Diamond. *hug*

  ataraxia
11/30/08 (09:22 PM) 
well written, and evokes many emotions. sad truth sounds like "destiny's toy". love. ata

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