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"LIFE ON THE OTHER HAND"
  by grim



LISTEN THIS STRAIGHT FROM MY HEART TO THE STREETS...
SO I DONT NEED A HARD BEAT I JUST NEED A FLOW...
SO IM'MA GO...

IM FEELIN SO SAD....
IM FELLIN SO MAD...
IS IT BECAUSE OF MY DAD ...
I NEVER SEEN HIM ONE TIME IN MY LIFE..
BUT I DONT CARE ABOUT THAT MAD I JUST WONT ..
TO MAKE MY MOM PROUD...
IN I KNOW MOSTLY EVERY MAN IN THE HOOD NEVER HAD A DAD...
SO WHY F*** THAT GIRL IN LEAVE HER ON HER BACK...
IN WHY YOU NEVER CAME BACK...

WHY YOU LEFT HER ALONE TO FEED THAT KID BY HERSELF
IN WHY YOU LEAVE HER IN THE DARK YOU COULD HAVE TURN ON THE LIGHTS...
IN MADE HER LIFE A LITTLE BRIGHT...
IN WHY YOU SMACK HER WHY YOU GOTTA STARTA FIGHT ..
WHEN YOU KNOW SHE TAKING CARE OF THAT KID ALONE BY HERSELF..
WHEN YOU KNOW WHEN THAT KID GET OLDER..
YOU WONT BE KNOW WERE TO BE FOULD...
SO DEEP IN SIDE YEA SHE SOILDER..
IN THAT KID JUST MAD CAUSE HE NEVER HAD A FATHER AROUND..

LISTEN THIS STRAIGHT FROM MY HEART TO THE STREETS...
SO I DONT NEED A HARD BEAT I JUST NEED A FLOW...

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Date Submitted: Aug 19, 2008 (11:18 PM)
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  Fifikins
08/28/08 (10:08 PM) 
Flowwwww real subject...Real questions...Really deep...I dig. Nice write = D

  DatGuhShawty
08/27/08 (08:20 PM) 
I really like thiz one thiz favorite.Well..it true about daddi.But I dont know wat say cause.My daddi was there but he died. Every seen then I got stepdaddy dat treat us like....his real kids stuff.

  ButterflyDream
08/25/08 (04:38 AM) 
wonderful job u displayed ur feelings in such a controlled manner allowing you clearly paint us a pic

  NICKY BOO
08/24/08 (10:19 PM) 
damn i felt the emotion through my computer screen..the essence you created was on point man..this is deep..ten stars once again

  KissyOo_3.21.0...
08/24/08 (10:09 PM) 
Niiiiiiiiicceee! I feel ur pain tho....Keep the flow goin

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