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"life is good"
by cyrux
- This Poem is a response to the poem
I wanna die !!!
by
loren
we dont have to spin around
in this cold cold world
God is making the terms
so we dont get drown.
look around hear the sound
when the bird skip sing
it only get me wow
and makes me wish to sing
life is good if you knew
you just be happy as me
i think its sweet dont be blue
just be the thing you wish to be
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Jul 14, 2008 (06:23 AM)
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COMMENTS (2)
loren
07/14/08 (07:23 AM)
dude this is awesome response. seariously its inspirationall write. easy 10 and fav
cyrux
07/14/08 (06:28 AM)
life is really good so we dont have to be blue
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