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"Life"
  by Lil' Shadow


sometime i feel like getting a little deep in my life look at me i use to smile but there isn't a reason to smile anymore look at the tear's i shed for too many year as these tears keep falling i think about the good days i use to have but i keep trying to raise my head up at time, but i cant because the pain is still here, look at the people we lost we need to thank them for what they did for us i'm talking about Malcolm X, Rosa Park, Martin Luther King Jr and every one else that did something for us please ya'll give them the thanks they deserve cause they did so much for us. look at all the glory we have for our black people look i'm not being races i'm just giving thanks to our people look at what happen to emmett till look i had to go here because that is really bogus that shouldnt happen why did he get treated like that there was no reason to now look at his family they is still suffering from this pain they carry for many years look at the tear's that coming down my eyes look i'm just out here to let every one know we can prove alot of people right come on just come together we can put this like it suppose to be thanks to all our soldiers too cause they didn't have to fight that war but they did i hope u return safe and to our fallen soldiers we love ya'll and miss ya'll
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Date Submitted: Jan 05, 2008 (11:47 PM)
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  baby girl oo7
09/16/08 (06:04 AM) 
damn this is mad deep i can relate to this matter of fact everybody who went throgh something can realte to this nice write keep up the good work 10 stars

  Dimplez
03/31/08 (12:35 AM) 
this is good, i think it would've been easier if it had not been in paragraph form though, kinda had me goin cross-eyed boo lol, but i def understand da message, good write!

  Ciara
02/11/08 (11:18 PM) 
Deep... Great Write... I like this alot... 10strz

  AR-15
01/30/08 (08:19 PM) 
Deeply worded message. I enjoyed reading this one. Very Nice Work 10 stars

  Tiphani
01/24/08 (12:22 AM) 
this was a very deeply written poem. I really liked the emotional flow that it had. Great I loved it

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