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"Liberate Us"
  by alastor



The natives are festive
They chant ,“Liberate us”
Callous foot
Stern cloud
Red magic
Red coal
Small kindle relishes tall flame
grows near God ear breach
United to purify
This is our procession
Circumference electric fuel dance on ancestry bones
Stomping whirling & twirling
Swirling circle tribe life Mandala troop
Conjoined soul & soul
Hand & hand
Nirvanic aboriginal Mecca soul retreat
Earthly-rooted coarse palms raise high towards the heavens
in madly divine driven prayer dance stints
Follow those shaman wing fate steps
to heal the ghost sore soul bones of the broken ancient warrior spirits
Left empty of marrow
Dressed in peyote blood
Spiraling howls awakening the sleeping heroes
from dark death forest perimeters
as they are summoned throughout the land,
the wind, the water and fire
Their spirits chime loud in ringing silver flint intrepidations
“Guide us to victory! Liberate us!”
Apocalyptic festive music trance search the tornadic wind
for brother broken arrow
Seeping meditation cleanse
Sister earth knows the dance
trembling on buried nerve synapse
Our awakening!
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Date Submitted: Oct 24, 2008 (05:21 PM)
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  Swallowed Scro...
11/21/08 (05:25 PM) 
alst...you took me to a far away land with this one and it was a beautiful moment to be so lost! you created images for me that just...made my heart sigh and my mind relish in what it was seeing. I love the native american culture, it has a spiritual/cosmic depth that i find very few can compare to- that is that world that you took me to with this write. It might not be the one you thought of, nor the one you wished to portray but it is where your words took me and that, as a reader, is one of t...
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  liriklmirikl
10/25/08 (10:42 AM) 
very dramatic and deserves all the praise you get.cheers for being a tonic,jona

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