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"Let's Wait A While"
  by El Diablo


Warm brown skin
touchin' mine
from the finger tips
to the muscle in my neck
ending to the kiss
on the lips...

You take me there.

Eyes lookin' into mine
sparklin' under
the star's shine.
I gazed into
your forbidden side
you gazed into
my curiosity
the side I hide
and said,

"I don't have any fears..."

Down I was
for I was diggin'
the way ya curves
felt against my body.
I was feelin' ya vibe,
did you feel mine?

"I'm wantin' you in the worst way..."

And we got into it
...that's all I can say.

Moments before
our bodies became
One
My heart jumped,
leavin' me speechless,
no words to say.
My thoughts,
hormones,
pulse,
were all racing
As you questioned,

"What are you thinkin'?"

I took you into
my arms
and breathed deeply
softly speaking,

"Beautiful you are to me, in every aspect of what I consider perfection in my eyes. But to move on with tonight, I cannot do, we're both ready, but it is too soon. I don't want to jepordize what we have, I want it to last, so that even when the storms follow through...I'll be loving you, for you."

Confusion followed
through me,
these words
I could not believe,
but through
the darkness
I seen you smile,
and you said to me

"Let's wait a while."

---> I havent heard this song in a min, so when I did, I decided to write to it. This is the product, hope you enjoy.
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Date Submitted: Jun 17, 2007 (02:26 PM)
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  biscuit
12/03/08 (09:18 AM) 
OMG dis was sweet and sick doe..u talented as hell..keep it up gotta fav it

  me-me
12/01/08 (11:16 PM) 
enjoyed this to the utmost i recently met a lady and we have had this happen i didnt have words for it then but i do now great write i loved it 10 stars

  Taeda
11/27/08 (10:31 AM) 
This was so beautiful 10 starz

  cococouture
11/06/08 (03:07 PM) 
this was very sweet, i loved it

  latanya
10/23/08 (12:20 PM) 
I fell inlove with this one! I will probably read it atleast 2 more times. Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing.

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