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"Lethal Lips"
  by *F1* BROWN
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Edible by Tha Scorpion


From the whisper
Released from in between
All doubts about whether or not they can please
Evaporates like a Virgin’s orgasm

Not believing the heat
from which they came
You move in for a closer feel

and notice...

that their skills
have melted your heart

Not understanding the power
of it's caress
You allow him to kiss
your most precious part of your being
The "you" not yet known to many

His lips are allowed to venture into your
mind
body
and soul

...and once he's there
he ravishes you...
He reconstructs that which was damaged by amatures

What will command your every move now

Are his lips


What will beckon orgasms from deep within your inner core

Are his lips


What will drive you insane
are the skills of
Those
Beautiful
Lips


Those Lips are so soft
you'll swear you were being kissed by rose pedals

Yet they are strong enough
to conceal a tongue gifted by God Himself...

but that's a different story...

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Date Submitted: Dec 05, 2008 (12:06 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 12/05/08 (11:45 PM)
Author: jdbrown
Poem Title: Terrorist Tongue

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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  Dana Dane
12/09/08 (04:09 PM) 
Very nice dedication! I cant stop staring.... i know, its rude. lol Scorp... like you dont remind us of said skills on a daily basis! lmao

  Miss Self Suff...
12/05/08 (11:06 AM) 
Damn damn damn..ok scorp.. them lips sweetheart! shit.. Oh wow.. this was great i like the way you described the intensity! 10*s

  Tha Scorpion
12/05/08 (10:39 AM) 
Lawd have mercy BRENDA!! Now the whole world will know it's not just the Scorpion dick that does the trick, but my lips as well!!! This was lovely indeed baby cakes!

  *Miss Toya*
12/05/08 (09:07 AM) 
okay you did your thing with this one trouble...

  Shaboogie
12/05/08 (08:57 AM) 
hmm whoevers lips u used as a backdrop are3 definitely nice. this was another great erotic keep writing.

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