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"let me take you there"
  by blaque


the smell of vanilla lingers in the air
arousing all senses...leading you...
straight to bed...
warming oil ready for pure sensuality...
full body massage from head to toe...
allow me to make sweet love to you with my words
written all over your body with my tongue
tracing every inch of YOU...
definitely not afraid of the dark...
close your eyes and imagine me dancing for you
to the tune of your racing heart
staring into your eyes
kissing your neck, nibbling on your ears
allowing my tongue to trace the words that flow from your lips...
tasty
watching your manhood rise, rubbing up against you
touching you
temperature rising
bend.....SLAP it daddi
about to explode...
i love it...touching
makes me want you even more
i hear your body calling for me...whispering love
shouting out in lust
standing in the mist...of the Niagra Falls
rushing waters loom above you, dousing you with a generous spray
as you face...the beautiful imperfections
visible rainbows day and night...
have you ever known anything so beautiful
allow me to take you there daddi...



Put U To Bed - J Holiday
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Date Submitted: Nov 06, 2008 (02:54 AM)
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  Karma
11/08/08 (07:46 PM) 
I heard the hell out of that..i mean you described that really well...the imagery in this scribe was superb..your expression was great as well...keep itt up ---KarmazKandiKissez----

  Tha Scorpion
11/08/08 (01:59 PM) 
Well ok thrn baby, tell ya what, you can take me there anytime you wanna!!

  MAVRICK
11/07/08 (09:46 AM) 
dannngg Blaque...u didn't have to take me ALL THE WAY there, i could've met you HALF WAY..hahah..whew...Is it hot in here or is it just me and this write?...okay shower time...haha

  Novikaine
11/06/08 (07:30 PM) 
hmmmm....every good man needs a girly like dat knowing the best comes with years of making up with love

  TWANGINU
11/06/08 (05:20 AM) 
WOW.THATS WHATS UP.....I SITING HERE LIKE....DAG THAT SOUNDS SO GOOD RIGHT NOW.DAG GIRL..I LIKE THIS WRITE.YOU GOT ME SMILING LOL.KEEP IT UP BABY..YOU GET 100 STARS FOR THIS ONE LOL

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