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"Let me Love You...Up"
  by Breezyboo
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Ya Know Ya Luv Me { In Sex Minor} by Tha Scorpion


Yea I might call you nasty,
But
if you ask me
To do whatever,
Ill do it gladly
Rub it, smack it,
Ya nasty qualities,
I want them badly.
Daddy
Fuck me fastly,
I mean faster,
maybe harder
Go hard,
cuz I flow hard like Mr. Carter.
Take me farther
than a raft sitting on rapid waters.
You are the book and I am the author
I offer
everything you need,
everything you want ,
and everything you desire.
What we do in the bedroom is hot
Because I am on fire!
I stay true to what I do
I am not a liar.
Let me ride ya
Satisfy ya
I'ma drug dealer
so how 'bout I supply ya,
some of this ecstasy
between my knees.
You'll be addicted,
It's something you can't live without,
It's something that you need.
I'm sure you'll be pleased
Cease
the moment
Take a deep breath,
Smell that?
That's our aroma.
Come ova,
you'll see
I'll fuck you into a coma.
You'll never meet a chick like me
I got this
no need to bend me ova.
I'ma freak even when I'm sober.
When you get here it's over.
Come be my customer,
you want a drink with that?
I cum enough to fill a 12 ounce cup.
I'm ready for you
Whassup?
I know you love me
Now Let me love you up.
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Date Submitted: Aug 06, 2008 (12:20 PM)
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  HOUND79
08/18/08 (04:46 PM) 
HOT HOT WRITE... LUV IT NICE FLOW

  angeleyes1
08/12/08 (12:30 PM) 
very nicely written and very hot response keep flowing with your words much love poet

  TwiZted
08/11/08 (01:24 AM) 
OK, YES I DIG THIS ONE!!! 10+++STARS GIRL I DIG THA NASTY POETRY HAD MY HEART BEATIN ALL FAST!! LOL!! HOTT WRITE THO 4 REAL!

  Daios
08/11/08 (12:41 AM) 
damn...tha's good.

  KNYNE
08/11/08 (12:24 AM) 
One word...hotttt!!! Okay, I repeat it hotttt!!! The wordz, the visuals, the inflections, the sensual swagga made me wanna get my video cam since I most definitely was in the room. Lemme know if you need a director and/or producer for this movie. LOL

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