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"Let Me Be That Love"
  by THE REALIST POET
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Ready for real love by Quash


Real love is no game that you roll the dice to and hope to
come out witha seven, Real love is no fallacy that you
lie about just to feel as if you are complete, touching words
and realistic thoughts, poems of expressions and kisses so
passionate and sweet, to hold you hand in public and not be
ashamed to make you my girl, to love you geniunely, to cherish
you, to build my life up around you and make you my world, to
stare into your eyes and see your soul as it smiles, to long for your
hugs, your kisses, your love, and your pretty smile, to feel connected

to you in a manner ole' so deep, to feel the passionate in my words
as i begin to speak, to wake up and my first thought has become of
you, to utter your name, stutter across your feet as we walk, damn
baby can't you see that im falling for you, to hold you dearly as my heart
rythmtically moves to the pulsation of your heartbeat, my hands lock with
your as our feet walk to the same beat, my soul calls out your name and my
body clings to your touch, my day is best, because my best is in you, my love
from god, has been blessed from you!
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Date Submitted: Oct 30, 2008 (09:46 PM)
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  mz_April
11/05/08 (07:39 PM) 
i love this write you have such a wonderful talent keep up the great work sweety

  Princess Of Po...
11/05/08 (06:26 PM) 
I love this, it it sweet and has a nice flow.10strz

  domonique
11/03/08 (07:13 AM) 
wow i love this one u really understand what it mean to have someone on ur mind and just want everything to be about them cuz u want them to be happy because u love them! most men don't get that but any women who has fall n love know what your talking about, believe me i know, just hope u found someone who feels the same way that u do. hott write 10 stars

  Rayve
11/01/08 (06:22 PM) 
awww....... see this is sweet....... noth that cheessy ass hallmark sweet but the realistic sweet

  MizzJess09
11/01/08 (05:59 PM) 
aww...so sweet. i want 2 find sumone 2 love me like dat. 10 stars.

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