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"lass lips"
  by ataraxia
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Licking It Like... by The Mad Poet




he skin savors, tastes
her lass lips, licking she hips
writhing, is rising

he sun seeking, be
circle speaking, blooming buds,
he wet womb whispers

breath soft rushing skin,
less breath, teasing he making
wild stream, she flowing
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Date Submitted: Apr 18, 2008 (10:45 PM)
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  Jones
05/12/08 (02:29 AM) 
Provocative erotic. Consistently, you be hypnotic. The imagery of this work is outstanding, as is your wont--my favorite is perhaps "he sun seeking, be| speaking cirlces"... though, I'm not gonna lie, I can't quite wrap my mind around it. ;.) Love and peace.

  mindigoblue
04/22/08 (11:17 AM) 
I really like that way you broke this down Ata. Your way of expressing always amazes me...leaving me so impressed. I wish I could learn this art at least half as well as you have it down. I truly enjoyed this very sexy piece.

  ...Da RiDdLeR ...
04/19/08 (12:38 PM) 
feel like im in the outback @ nite wheres my damn boomerang so wild freaky oral sex is happening in those bushes over there.. LMAO .. Peace

  One
04/19/08 (10:35 AM) 
I agreee with becks...ahhhhhhhhhhhh...sorta bubbly and bright...mad love...u kilt this...truly...:O)...I feel all warm n gooey inside...lol

  Demon of Darkn...
04/19/08 (04:01 AM) 
AS ALWAY IT FIYAH, BUT DIS DARK KNIGHT STANDS IN YOUR HONOUR AT THE DEPTH OF THE VISUALS THE WORD PLAY.. YES YES IM LOVING DIS MORE DAN I CAN PUT ON HERE...YOU DREW MY BEGRIMMED HEART AND RIPPED OPEN ITS INSIDES TO EXPERIENCE LIGHT FOR ONE MOMENT IN TIME.. TANXS MAMMI DIS IS BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE DA BIT WHERE YOU WRITE HE SUN SEEKING BE CIRCLE SPEAKING BLOOMING BUDS HE WET WOMB WHISPERS... YES YES YES... SUCH STRONG DEPTH OF VERBAGE JUS DARE..

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